Eragon / Inheritance

series by Christopher Paolini

My Thoughts

When I started reading "Eragon" I was ready to be done with the series. I had decided that young Mr. Paolini was trying too hard to display his grasp of vocabulary and demonstrating a brazen disregard for the work of those fantasy writers before him by stealing from absolutely every one of them he possibly could.

For a large part, I still believe this.

At the end of "Eragon", however, I was interested enough to see if my predictions for the direction of the story were try to borrow a copy of "Eldest" from a friend and read it.

I was mostly right.

However, during the 2nd book -- which is much longer and (I believe) much better written -- I began to "take" more and more to Mr. Paolini's writing. I still think he's trying to introduce way too much vocabulary -- I know most writers do this but you've got to be careful not to overload your readers with trips to the dictionary or you'll lose the pacing of the story (in my opinion). In my judgement, this series would be a decent introduction to fantasy for my boys - except for the college-level words that keep popping up in the grade-school level story.

I also still believe he's stolen from more authors than I've read. However (again), I have to admit that he's writing a decent tale in and of itself. I recently started reading "The Hobbit" to my sons. I love that story but, apparently, it's been a while since I've read it. Trying to read it aloud, I've discovered that Mr. Tolkien didn't exactly write it for ease-of-reading. In this regard, Paolini has made a bit of an improvement on the goodies he stole from Tolkien -- I could read this to my young children and not have to interpret quite so much between what my eyes read and what my mouth speaks.

So, after having journeyed through two books now -- and having slowly fallen in love with the characters -- I sit and wait for "Inheritance" to come and satisfy this need-to-know that I have inside.

I have to admit that, once I start a story, I really have to finish it -- and I should have expected this when I started this series -- but mid-way through the end of the first book I would have bet you money that this was one story that I really saw no need to see the end of. Thankfully, Mr. Paolini has proven me wrong.

SPOILER WARNING!
(If you haven't read "Eragon", you should stop reading now and come back later.)

From the book

As I sit and think about Eragon (the character) and try to imagine where he's going next (while I wait for the final book), I keep going back to "the prophecy". So, in order to save the binding on my book, I have transplanted it here.

Plus, I think this may lead to some predictions later in this page when I get time ..

Angela's (and Solembum's) Prophesy for Eragon

"I offered to do this for the other two people who talked with him. Only the woman agreed to it. Selena was her name. Ah, she regretted it, too. Her fortune was bleak and painful. I don�t think she believed it � not at first."

Emotion overcame Eragon, bringing tears to his eyes. "Selena," he whispered to himself. His mother�s name. Could it have been her? Was her destiny so horrible that she had to abandon me? "Do you remember anything about her fortune?" he asked, feeling sick.

Angela shook her head and sighed. "It was so long ago that the details have melted into the rest of my memory, which isn�t as good as it used to be. Besides, I�ll not tell you what I do remember. That was for her and her alone. It was sad, though; I�ve never forgotten the look on her face."

Eragon closed his eyes and struggled to regain control of his emotions. "Why do you complain about your memory?" he asked to distract himself. "You�re not that old."

Dimples appeared on Angela�s cheeks. "I�m flattered, but don�t be deceived; I�m much older than I look. The appearance of youth probably comes from having to eat my own herbs when times are lean."

Smiling, Eragon took a deep breath. If that was my mother and she could bear to have her fortune told, I can too. "Cast the bones for me," he said solemnly.

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Finally, Angela leaned back and heaved a long sigh. She wiped her brow and pulled out a wineskin from under the counter. "Do you want some?" she asked. Eragon shook his head. She shrugged and drank deeply. "This," she said, wiping her mouth, "is the hardest reading I�ve ever done. You were right. Your future is nigh impossible to see. I�ve never known of anyone�s fate being so tangled and clouded. I was, however, able to wrestle a few answers from it."

Solembum jumped onto the counter and settled there, watching them both. Eragon clenched his hands as Angela pointed to one of the bones. "I will start here," she said slowly, "because it is the clearest to understand."

The symbol on the bone was a long horizontal line with a circle resting on it. "Infinity or long life," said Angela quietly. "This is the first time I have ever seen it come up in someone�s future. Most of the time it�s the aspen or the elm, both signs that a person will live a normal span of years. Whether this means that you will live forever or that you will only have an extraordinarily long life, I�m not sure. Whatever it foretells, you may be sure that many years lie ahead of you."

No surprises there � I am a Rider, thought Eragon. Was Angela only going to tell him things he already knew?

"Now the bones grow harder to read, as the rest are in a confused pile." Angela touched three of them. "Here the wandering path, lightning bolt, and sailing ship all lie together � a pattern I�ve never seen, only heard of. The wandering path shows that there are many choices in your future, some of which you face even now. I see great battles raging around you, some of the fought for your sake. I see the mighty powers of this land struggling to control your will and destiny. Countless possible futures await you � all of them filled with blood and conflict � but only one will bring you happiness and peace. Beware of losing your way, for you are one of the few who are truly free to choose their own fate. That freedom is a gift, but it is also a responsibility more binding than chains."

Then her face grew sad. "And yet, as if to counteract that, here is the lightning bolt. It is a terrible omen. There is a doom upon you, but of what sort I know not. Part of it lies in a death � one that rapidly approaches and will cause you much grief. But the rest awaits in a great journey. Look closely at this bone. You can see how its end rest on that of the sailing ship. That is impossible to misunderstand. Your fate will be to leave this land forever. Where you will end up I know not, but you will never again stand in Alagaesia. This is inescapable. It will come to pass even if you try to avoid it."

Her words frightened Eragon. Another death . . . who must I lost now? His thought immediately went to Roran. Then he thought about his homeland. What could ever force me to leave? And where would I go? If there are lands across the sea or to the eat, only the elves know of them.

Angela rubbed her temples and breathed deeply. "The next bone is easier to read and perhaps a bit more pleasant." Eragon examined it and saw a rose blossom inscribed between the horns of a crescent moon.

Angela smiled and said, "An epic romance is in your future, extraordinary, as the moon indicates � for that is a magical symbol � and strong enough to outlast empires. I cannot say if this passion will end happily, but your love is of noble birth and heritage. She is powerful, wise, and beautiful beyond compare."

Of noble birth, thought Eragon in surprise. How could that ever happen? I have no more standing than the poorest of farmers.

"Now for the last two bones, the tree and the hawthorn root, which cross each other strongly. I wish that this were not so � it can only mean trouble � but betrayal is clear. And it will come from within your family."

"Roran wouldn�t do that!" objected Eragon abruptly.

"I wouldn�t know," said Angela carefully. "But the bones have never lied, and that is what they say."

Doubt wormed into Eragon�s mind, but he tried to ignore it. What reason would there ever be for Roran to turn on him? Angela put a comforting hand on his shoulder and offered him the wineskin again. This time Eragon accepted the drink, and it made him feel better.

"After all that, death might be welcome," he joked nervously. Betrayal from Roran? It couldn�t happen! It won�t!

"It might be," said Angela solemnly, then laughed slightly. "But you shouldn�t fret about what has yet to occur. The only way the future can harm us is by causing worry. I guarantee that you�ll feel better once you�re out in the sun."

"Perhaps." Unfortunately, he reflected wryly, nothing she said will make sense until it has already happened. If it really does, he amended himself. "You used words of power," he noted quietly.

Angela�s eyes flashed. "What I wouldn�t give to see how the rest of your life plays out. You can speak to werecats, know of the ancient language, and have a most interesting future. Also, few young men with empty pockets and rough traveling clothes can expect to be loved by a noblewoman. Who are you?"

Eragon realized that the werecat must have not have told Angela that he was a Rider. He almost said, "Evan," but then changed his mind and simply stated, "I am Eragon."

Angela arched her eyebrows. "Is that who you are or your name?" she asked.

"Both," said Eragon with a small smile, thinking of his namesake the first Rider.

"Now I�m all the more interested in seeing how your life will unfold. Who was the ragged man with you yesterday?"

Eragon decided that one more name couldn�t hurt. "His name is Brom."

A guffaw suddenly burst out of Angela, doubling her over in mirth. She wiped her eyes and took a sip of wine, then fought off another attack of merriment. Finally, gasping for breath, she forced out, "Oh . . . that one! I had no idea!"

"What is it?" demanded Eragon.

"No, no, don�t be upset," said Angela, hiding a smile. "It�s only that � well, he is known by those in my profession. I�m afraid that the poor man�s doom, or future if you will, is something of a joke with us."

"Don�t insult him! He�s a better man than any you could find!" snapped Eragon.

"Peace, peace," chided Angela with amusement. "I know that. If we meet again at the right time I�ll be sure to tell you about it. But in the meantime you should � " She stopped speaking as Solembum padded between them. The werecat stared at Eragon with unblinking eyes.

Yes? Eragon asked, irritated.

Listen closely and I will tell you two things. When the time comes and you need a weapon, look under the roots of the Menoa tree. Then, when all seems lost and your power is insufficient, go to the Rock of Kuthian and speak your name to open the Vault of Souls.

Before Eragon could ask what Solembum meant, the werecat walked away, waving his tail ever so gracefully. Angela tilted her head, coils of dense hair shadowing her forehead. "I don�t know what he said, and I don�t want to know. He spoke to you and only you. Don�t tell anyone else."

"I think I have to go," said Eragon, shaken.